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More lovely cement · **7 Likes**

Just caught my eye with the cement works lit up by the evening sun. The small specs to the right are a load of crows. (they look crow shaped in the original).

stevejo · 12-08-2020, 10:37 AM

Originally posted by simsburyphoto

Great mood. Wish it did not have the taller branches in the foreground in the lower left.

Thanks for your feedback. These were quite deliberate to give more interest to the foreground which would otherwise be just a straight line of hedge and an additional diagonal, but I see what you mean.

(specs should of course read specks).

kjfishman · 12-08-2020, 11:34 AM

Very dramatic, well done.

sergeremy · 12-08-2020, 11:52 AM

That is a magnificent image, Steve. Beautifully composed and masterfully processed.

stevejo · 12-08-2020, 12:18 PM

Originally posted by sergeremy

That is a magnificent image, Steve. Beautifully composed and masterfully processed.

Thanks but I wouldn't go quite that far. Hopefully I will get better with practice.

amodali · 12-08-2020, 01:47 PM

great job, great shot!

sergeremy · 12-08-2020, 02:27 PM

Originally posted by stevejo

Hopefully I will get better with practice

Won't we all!

**Michail_P** · 12-08-2020, 02:38 PM

I like the overall concept. The work on the smoke is nice and the color is appropriate.

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12-08-2020, 10:37 AM	#16
stevejo Pentaxian Join Date: Nov 2020 Location: Worcestershire, UK Photos: Albums Posts: 527 Original Poster	Originally posted by simsburyphoto Great mood. Wish it did not have the taller branches in the foreground in the lower left. Thanks for your feedback. These were quite deliberate to give more interest to the foreground which would otherwise be just a straight line of hedge and an additional diagonal, but I see what you mean. (specs should of course read specks).

12-08-2020, 11:34 AM	#17
kjfishman Pentaxian Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: St. Louis Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 705	Very dramatic, well done.

12-08-2020, 11:52 AM	#18
sergeremy Pentaxian Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Périgueux Posts: 733	That is a magnificent image, Steve. Beautifully composed and masterfully processed.

12-08-2020, 12:18 PM	#19
stevejo Pentaxian Join Date: Nov 2020 Location: Worcestershire, UK Photos: Albums Posts: 527 Original Poster	Originally posted by sergeremy That is a magnificent image, Steve. Beautifully composed and masterfully processed. Thanks but I wouldn't go quite that far. Hopefully I will get better with practice.

12-08-2020, 01:47 PM	#20
amodali Forum Member Join Date: Nov 2016 Location: Rome Photos: Gallery Posts: 99	great job, great shot!

12-08-2020, 02:27 PM	#21
sergeremy Pentaxian Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Périgueux Posts: 733	Originally posted by stevejo Hopefully I will get better with practice Won't we all!

12-08-2020, 02:38 PM	#22
Michail_P Site Supporter Join Date: Nov 2019 Location: Kalymnos Photos: Gallery Posts: 3,006	I like the overall concept. The work on the smoke is nice and the color is appropriate.

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