Okay, you requested feedback and here it is. Looking at her lovely face I would certainly remove the heavy, dark make up under her eyes. They do detract from her beauty. Next, the pink pom poms gotta go. As in your last portrait of this young lady, please do not be apprehensive in increasing the exposure even by experimenting. If the K-1 has ISO 125, give it a try and see how it works. Additionally, go with a top/blouse that is one solid color with no images or graphics to pull the viewers eyes away. I would crop from left to right to remove the red building and then from right to left to remove the tree as these are distractions that do not enhance the portrait in any way. The shoulder bag I would have asked her to set it down for the shoot. As in your last work with this
subject, it would immensely improve her overall appearance if she were to allow her hair to just fall naturally over her shoulders without the bands. One thought I keep in mind when doing portraits
Is: "What would a professional leave in the portrait?" One more thing; See how it would fit to have her part her hair down the middle and brushed to the sides. I mean bangs are okay, but for her, not very flattering. Once again, quite an improvement over the first portrait of yours that I commented on. Another damn fine effort. Never get discouraged, you are doing fine and you are on your way to becoming a very good portrait photographer. Best regards, Tonytee
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