i'm gonna pimp my own thread here from the Lens forum, but would really appreciate any feed back, especially negative
https://www.pentaxforums.com/forums/pentax-slr-lens-discussion/43133-travelling-limiteds-using-film-new-york-edition.html

[Jimbo]

Ok, I could be the last person that has the right to comment on any photo's as I am still way into the learning process. They're a fee for me that are stands outs. First #1 is really well done though I would crop the top to just above the fence line to show the foreground off. On number #4 I would crop both egdes to to outside door frame to draw the eye in more and #9, I would love to see the full version.. no changes needed. Great series and I don't mean to point out things that my eye catches, as many have told me the same, only to realize as much as I may think they are wrong.. in the end they may be but I do learn on this forum.. Great work! JIMBO

[k100d]

holy crap posts here move down quick!

Ok, I could be the last person that has the right to comment on any photo's as I am still way into the learning process. They're a fee for me that are stands outs. First #1 is really well done though I would crop the top to just above the fence line to show the foreground off. On number #4 I would crop both egdes to to outside door frame to draw the eye in more and #9, I would love to see the full version.. no changes needed. Great series and I don't mean to point out things that my eye catches, as many have told me the same, only to realize as much as I may think they are wrong.. in the end they may be but I do learn on this forum.. Great work! JIMBO

thanks for your reply jimbo

for #1 i wanted to keep the stuff above the fence line in order to show stuff going into the distance, and having the light post there i thought was interesting

for #4 i agree, i could be more aggressive with the cropping, because there is an inner

here's #9 in full, just ground really

[Jimbo]

Interesting photo's all of them.. I took another look at the first and agree with the way you cropped the shot. Thanks for showing the full image on #9. JIMBO