hey all, and thanks for the comments.
This set up was made at home, not really even a home made studio, and was a first effort at some high key photography.
I had a white sheet hung up with one flash balanced on my desk to light the background
One flash with broken umbrella attached to my tripod to light my model(daughter), no sync lead so had to use an old manual flash attached to my camera to set of other flashes which had no modeling lights. Flashes (very old crappy studio flashes) only had three power settings and didnt seem to make much of a difference.
I think if i had a sync lead i could experiment a little more with positioning of lighting but hey.....I have seen a lot worse.
I look at the picture and see on camera flash on the left side of her face lighting the skin
would have been much nicer not to have that, I think even lowering the flash output on my K20d would have been an idea in hindsight. After about 12 shots my daughter had had enough.
One day I may be able to buy some decent gear, but practice with the crap i have right now will only make for improvement in the future