Forgot Password
Pentax Camera Forums Home
 

Reply
Show Printable Version Search this Thread
  #1
Old Barn
Posted By: ohfrankyboy, 03-08-2009, 08:21 PM

Old Barn on hill

Attached Images
 


Last edited by ohfrankyboy; 03-09-2009 at 03:23 PM.
Views: 1,672
03-08-2009, 08:56 PM   #2
Veteran Member
roentarre's Avatar

Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Posts: 11,794
A little too strong for the contrast. But the impact is definitely there.

I like the overall composition for sure. A little bit more grey and shadow details would be great
03-08-2009, 09:16 PM   #3
Forum Member
ohfrankyboy's Avatar

Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: Quebec, Canada
Posts: 76
Original Poster
Thanks I was looking for the high contrast
03-09-2009, 12:03 PM   #4
Veteran Member
gawan's Avatar

Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Helsinki
Photos: Gallery
Posts: 5,407
Powerful photo indeed, but now that the sky is so prominent, I would remove the foreground white area to where the couple of darker traits begin. So the barn it self could get more attention.

03-09-2009, 03:13 PM   #5
Inactive Account




Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: Oregon coast
Photos: Gallery
Posts: 30
This is a nice image, dramatic sky and clouds. It would work better for me with less foreground and the barn less centered. Good looking barn.
John
03-09-2009, 03:24 PM   #6
Forum Member
ohfrankyboy's Avatar

Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: Quebec, Canada
Posts: 76
Original Poster
Hey guys! thanks, ive reduce the foreground and yes it makes a great different!
03-09-2009, 03:37 PM   #7
Veteran Member
gawan's Avatar

Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Helsinki
Photos: Gallery
Posts: 5,407
Clear improvement, imho!
03-10-2009, 07:24 PM   #8
Pentaxian
cupic's Avatar

Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: Australia-NSW
Photos: Gallery
Posts: 4,763
Love those barn in the wide open plains


cheers

03-11-2009, 04:00 AM   #9
Site Supporter
Site Supporter
daacon's Avatar

Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Alberta,Canada
Photos: Gallery
Posts: 20,835
Nice - not sure what the first one looked like. Can't tell it is on a hill though. Good shot.
03-11-2009, 05:44 AM   #10
Veteran Member
vievetrick's Avatar

Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Easthampton - Massachusetts - USA
Photos: Gallery
Posts: 5,175
I like this version and never saw the first. Nice job.
Reply

Bookmarks
  • Submit Thread to Facebook Facebook
  • Submit Thread to Twitter Twitter
  • Submit Thread to Digg Digg
Tags - Make this thread easier to find by adding keywords to it!
barn, camera, photo
Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search


Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
An old Barn rouds39 Monthly Photo Contests 0 07-26-2010 03:40 PM
Landscape The Barn Ole Photo Critique 12 11-14-2009 03:02 PM
Old Barn Jimbo Post Your Photos! 13 05-06-2009 03:43 PM
an old Barn mtnbearhug Post Your Photos! 11 05-14-2008 10:46 PM
An old barn robert Post Your Photos! 9 12-15-2007 06:18 AM



All times are GMT -7. The time now is 08:54 AM. | See also: NikonForums.com, CanonForums.com part of our network of photo forums!
  • Red (Default)
  • Green
  • Gray
  • Dark
  • Dark Yellow
  • Dark Blue
  • Old Red
  • Old Green
  • Old Gray
  • Dial-Up Style
Hello! It's great to see you back on the forum! Have you considered joining the community?
register
Creating a FREE ACCOUNT takes under a minute, removes ads, and lets you post! [Dismiss]
Top