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Posted By: unkabin, 06-21-2009, 12:34 PM

Does this composition work, or is it too busy? I would like it to draw the eye to the right, to the carney under the yellow/orange light. Thanks for any feedback.

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06-21-2009, 12:48 PM   #2
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In my opinion it works if you want to show what a fair is. If you frame the orange side it will work too like another scene. Anyway i like very much this one
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Works OK, although the subject, the stall and stall-keeper on the right, doesn't seem to stand out much in the image. A little closer, and with the stall-keeper looking into the camera may have improved it. But there's lots to see in this photo without it being cluttered with unnecessary details.

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