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Late afternoon light · 02:21 PM

1/100s f/10.0 ISO100 35mm (DA 35mm Macro Limited)
I am curious what you think of this one, the light conditions were a bit hard, and yes you can see a bit of fog coming up on the right.

Damn Brit · 11-29-2009, 02:43 PM

The line of poles are the main thing that don't work for me, they would make the picture much more interesting if they were diagonally going into the frame.

If you do want critique, it's better to post in the critique section by the way.

bdery · 11-29-2009, 03:33 PM

I personally would have rotated the camera a few degrees to the left, to have more of the field and less of the road. With this particular light I'm not sure the poles framed diagonally would have worked.

Just my two cents.

wllm · 11-29-2009, 03:46 PM

Interesting points you've got here, maybe the next time I must experiment a bit more with the points of view, when there's enough time for it, as you can see there were clouds so the sun was now and than.
Gary thanks for mentioning the critique section. Next time.

Willem

**Ash** · 11-29-2009, 04:05 PM

Willem, what works in this photo is the beautiful texture created by the low sun on the sloping land. The above reservations about the power pole is agreed upon.

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11-29-2009, 02:43 PM	#2
Damn Brit Guest	The line of poles are the main thing that don't work for me, they would make the picture much more interesting if they were diagonally going into the frame. If you do want critique, it's better to post in the critique section by the way.

11-29-2009, 03:33 PM	#3
bdery Pentaxian Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Quebec city, Canada Photos: Gallery Posts: 9,363	I personally would have rotated the camera a few degrees to the left, to have more of the field and less of the road. With this particular light I'm not sure the poles framed diagonally would have worked. Just my two cents.

11-29-2009, 03:46 PM	#4
wllm Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 710 Original Poster	Interesting points you've got here, maybe the next time I must experiment a bit more with the points of view, when there's enough time for it, as you can see there were clouds so the sun was now and than. Gary thanks for mentioning the critique section. Next time. Willem

11-29-2009, 04:05 PM	#5
Ash Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Toowoomba, Queensland Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 23,920	Willem, what works in this photo is the beautiful texture created by the low sun on the sloping land. The above reservations about the power pole is agreed upon.

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