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Posted By: devisor, 12-13-2009, 04:15 AM

Going to do a avant garde shoot today.. so editing while waiting for the model to be finished with the styling:






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12-13-2009, 05:55 AM   #2
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Well done! As always from you.

I like all three of them.

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Nr1: is the best of them, to my eyes. Good pose, colors and PP. Nice modell to, nothing catastrophic here.

Nr2: At first i thought it was better than Nr1 with the pose, colors and look.
But then i noticed the arms. I would have placed her left arm so it was more visible. Her right arm is good, but i expect to see a hand. Its lost somewhere.

Nr3: Overall a good one. Left hand maybe a litle wrong, i cant explain that though.

Edit: Generaly i dont feel the need to coment your pictures, as they are always very good. You are very talented in what you do and its nice to know you do it for work. One of the things i find interesting is your PP. You have an clear and personal style and the quality of the PP is very good. I also like that you dont give the models to much "porcelain doll" look i PP.

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12-13-2009, 12:36 PM   #3
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Eric, more beautiful results from you.
#1 is pleasant - only thing that bothers me a little is her R leg being lifted and her body twisted in the opposite direction. It's a good pose, just one that looks a little 'plastic' (unnatural). It's still excellent, though.

#2 is simply stunning. Lighting, clothing, pose - brilliant.

#3 does look also a little stiff due to her L arm position. Perhaps if it were by her legs it would look better, but then her R arm would be too extended.

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Wow, the last shot is very good. Love all these images.
12-13-2009, 03:28 PM   #6
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I would try a mono convert on shot 3, as the colors are very muted in the shot. I actually like the striped outfit here, even though I tend to ask models not to wear prints and distracting lines on outfits.
12-14-2009, 04:27 PM   #7
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Superb shoot as seen in my Fav #2(Also nice skin tone) the hair flick is right on the money


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Excellent work as always.
Really great use of light (and of course the models are beautiful too )

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