Nature My first nature night shot

My first nature night shot · 08:42 PM

Inputs welcomed

fractal · 01-03-2010, 08:51 PM

Composition looks ok, tis a tad noisy & underexposed though Jillians. Did you plan for it to be so noisy?

Jillians · 01-03-2010, 09:00 PM

Yes, i added film grain, shall post it up the original one.

Jillians · 01-03-2010, 09:18 PM

This is the one without film grain.

**Ash** · 01-03-2010, 10:12 PM

Ah, that's cleaner, and I like it more now, but it is still quite empty. The eyes wander around looking for a subject to latch onto.

asdf · 01-03-2010, 11:12 PM

I like it.

Jillians · 01-03-2010, 11:30 PM

Hi Ash, im guessing you will like this version better?

Last edited by Jillians; 01-03-2010 at 11:37 PM.

asdf · 01-03-2010, 11:36 PM

Originally posted by Jillians

Hi Ash, im guessing you will like this version better?

I like the first one much better. This one sucks.

Jillians · 01-03-2010, 11:45 PM

Haha, okay. Thanks

asdf · 01-04-2010, 12:15 AM

Originally posted by Jillians

Haha, okay. Thanks

Hehe. I can elaborate: The rule-of-thirds works in the first one and I find the pattern of parallel lines appealing. The vignetting and under-exposure gives it an eerie look and the lack of a focal point makes you look into the horizon.

Jillians · 01-04-2010, 12:53 AM

Originally posted by asdf

Hehe. I can elaborate: The rule-of-thirds works in the first one and I find the pattern of parallel lines appealing. The vignetting and under-exposure gives it an eerie look and the lack of a focal point makes you look into the horizon.

Wow, good knowledge you have there. Perhaps you can fix a name for it?

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01-03-2010, 08:51 PM	#2
fractal Inactive Account Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Melbourne Photos: Gallery Posts: 3,547	Composition looks ok, tis a tad noisy & underexposed though Jillians. Did you plan for it to be so noisy?

01-03-2010, 09:00 PM	#3
Jillians Inactive Account Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 26 Original Poster	Yes, i added film grain, shall post it up the original one.

01-03-2010, 09:18 PM	#4
Jillians Inactive Account Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 26 Original Poster	This is the one without film grain.

01-03-2010, 10:12 PM	#5
Ash Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Toowoomba, Queensland Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 23,920	Ah, that's cleaner, and I like it more now, but it is still quite empty. The eyes wander around looking for a subject to latch onto.

01-03-2010, 11:12 PM	#6
asdf Veteran Member Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Canada Posts: 1,252	I like it.

01-03-2010, 11:30 PM	#7
Jillians Inactive Account Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 26 Original Poster	Hi Ash, im guessing you will like this version better? Last edited by Jillians; 01-03-2010 at 11:37 PM.

01-03-2010, 11:36 PM	#8
asdf Veteran Member Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Canada Posts: 1,252	Originally posted by Jillians Hi Ash, im guessing you will like this version better? I like the first one much better. This one sucks.

01-03-2010, 11:45 PM	#9
Jillians Inactive Account Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 26 Original Poster	Haha, okay. Thanks

01-04-2010, 12:15 AM	#10
asdf Veteran Member Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Canada Posts: 1,252	Originally posted by Jillians Haha, okay. Thanks Hehe. I can elaborate: The rule-of-thirds works in the first one and I find the pattern of parallel lines appealing. The vignetting and under-exposure gives it an eerie look and the lack of a focal point makes you look into the horizon.

01-04-2010, 12:53 AM	#11
Jillians Inactive Account Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 26 Original Poster	Originally posted by asdf Hehe. I can elaborate: The rule-of-thirds works in the first one and I find the pattern of parallel lines appealing. The vignetting and under-exposure gives it an eerie look and the lack of a focal point makes you look into the horizon. Wow, good knowledge you have there. Perhaps you can fix a name for it?