Originally posted by Donald they are all well exposed.
You need a slightly wider angle to better show each rooms' scene, or better cropping. They all seem a bit compressed, window frame-like.
The first photo is, for marketing purposes, terrible. It's not showing anything off.
Also, for me, some of them may come alive, or 'pop' with a person in them or other obvious human element: a robe, a towel, a drink, some fruit on the bar, etc.
Donald, thank you for your criticism.
All the service areas are in one large room. I shot at 18mm which is the widest angle I have. I cropped appropriately to show each service area without overlapping the other service areas.
For a front of the shop photo, this was unfortunately the best angle without distractions like I mentioned above. However, I have another shot I did take with the power line in the way, and although I am not good at post processing, I will try to post process it out since it shows the sign more prominently.
For the interior shots, I opted not to include people so that the aesthetics would be the main focus. However, your thought on additional props are a good idea. The human element would have been great for service photos, but again as I mentioned, no one was available at the time.
You seem to have experience with interior commercial photos. Do you have any samples that you have taken so I could get a better idea for next time?
Originally posted by little laker Toshi,
There's a beautiful old building that I want to photograph with the powerline problem you mentioned
I thought up a technique, that I haven't had the time to try it yet.
What I'm thinking of trying is set the camera on a level tripod. Take a picture, then raise the camera around 3" straight up.
Snap another picture, then rise the camera up again.
Do this at least 1 more time.
Then in photoshop or whatever your using to layer the pictures.
Line everything up as good as you can and with a little luck you should be able to blend them together hiding the power lines.
If you have a chance to try this technique before I do please let me know how it works.
Stu,
I'm not that great at post processing (layers, etc.) but I'll give it a shot with the photo I currently have with the power line in the way. If I can get a good result with it, I'll post it up
Toshi