People my first portrait

my first portrait · 12:50 PM

my first portrait - and it's a self portrait

Made with Sigma 17-70 and a wireless Metz 48 flash

maybe you have some ideas how to improve this...

PHILIP

jimH · 01-28-2010, 03:18 PM

It's a nice shot, may be a bit on the dark side though.

devisor · 01-28-2010, 03:30 PM

not bad to be first time

would ad more light to the skin tough.. so the image gets more contrast..

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jimH Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: South Central Nebraska - USA Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 1,771	It's a nice shot, may be a bit on the dark side though.

01-28-2010, 03:30 PM	#3
devisor Veteran Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Norway Photos: Gallery Posts: 1,470	not bad to be first time would ad more light to the skin tough.. so the image gets more contrast..