Nature Flowers and Me

Flowers and Me · 05:24 PM

Hi Everyone,
Are you ready for Spring? I removed my first picture and put my other picture on it now. What do you think? Smile

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https://www.pentaxforums.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=56545&stc=1&d=1268180279

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Damn Brit · 03-09-2010, 11:33 PM

Which one is you?

Danny Delcambre · 03-10-2010, 07:51 AM

Ha Ha What do yo think about my picture?

Damn Brit · 03-10-2010, 04:03 PM

It's a little bit dark.

Clicker · 03-10-2010, 04:55 PM

Looks like you're about to give a photographic "here are your flowers"

Danny Delcambre · 03-10-2010, 05:34 PM

Ok I will adjust little from Lightroom soon. Thanks

Danny Delcambre · 03-11-2010, 12:29 PM

I add one other picture.

https://www.pentaxforums.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=56726&stc=1&d=1268335677

Last edited by Danny Delcambre; 06-02-2010 at 09:40 AM.

booger · 03-14-2010, 08:12 AM

As a heterosexual, I will not support these photos here or elsewhere on the internet. I may take photos of flowers, but never include them in the frame with my face. These are also lacking technical aspects, such as, correct focus, exposure, composition.....etc. Hope this helps.....you.

booger

song_hm · 03-14-2010, 11:42 AM

Relatively speaking, the 2nd shot in post #7 is better than the original because of the facial expression.

In both shots, it is not clear what you are trying to say. Spring is supposed to be cheerful, these two images conveys the opposite.

Usually, flowers and men don't mix, I am not seeing anything that explicitly relate these two together, so my first inclination is to relegate the flowers as secondary and or incidental. But clearly, your title intended the flowers to be primary subject, in this sense, it is not working as you envisioned. The impression I get are:

1. In picture #1, "Oh come on, can't you see I am busy"
2. In picture #2, "Help, I am being censored"

Consider eliminating the negative spaces on the upper left, and the distracting blurred lamp. Try a square crop. Confusing message aside, at least you have a stronger composition.

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Danny Delcambre Veteran Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 550 Original Poster	Ha Ha What do yo think about my picture?

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Damn Brit Guest	It's a little bit dark.

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Clicker Veteran Member Join Date: May 2008 Photos: Gallery Posts: 3,241	Looks like you're about to give a photographic "here are your flowers"

03-10-2010, 05:34 PM	#6
Danny Delcambre Veteran Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 550 Original Poster	Ok I will adjust little from Lightroom soon. Thanks

03-11-2010, 12:29 PM	#7
Danny Delcambre Veteran Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 550 Original Poster	I add one other picture. https://www.pentaxforums.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=56726&stc=1&d=1268335677 Last edited by Danny Delcambre; 06-02-2010 at 09:40 AM.

03-14-2010, 08:12 AM	#8
booger Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 38	As a heterosexual, I will not support these photos here or elsewhere on the internet. I may take photos of flowers, but never include them in the frame with my face. These are also lacking technical aspects, such as, correct focus, exposure, composition.....etc. Hope this helps.....you. booger

03-14-2010, 11:42 AM	#9
song_hm Veteran Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Pennsylvania, USA Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 797	Relatively speaking, the 2nd shot in post #7 is better than the original because of the facial expression. In both shots, it is not clear what you are trying to say. Spring is supposed to be cheerful, these two images conveys the opposite. Usually, flowers and men don't mix, I am not seeing anything that explicitly relate these two together, so my first inclination is to relegate the flowers as secondary and or incidental. But clearly, your title intended the flowers to be primary subject, in this sense, it is not working as you envisioned. The impression I get are: 1. In picture #1, "Oh come on, can't you see I am busy" 2. In picture #2, "Help, I am being censored" Consider eliminating the negative spaces on the upper left, and the distracting blurred lamp. Try a square crop. Confusing message aside, at least you have a stronger composition.