@mr.b.snowden
I like the second shoot best. I think it is really good.
Still I see very visible purple fringing on the hand that is for me a key part of the picture... I tried to correct it in DxO, it required some heavy setting but it worked.
Also I have the feeling the face color is a bit too saturated maybe? Maybe the model is like that in reality, I realise it already look better to me with dark background on flickr as opposed to white one in Pentax Forum. Still it seems to look better to me less saturated overall... It doesn't prevent the dress to have punchy colors. But maybe it is just my screen settings ?