Originally posted by stub Thanks...If you only spotted one that's not a bad start....lol
First paragraph:
trial "there" offering
should be "their"
I would also suggest using full sentences. Not this:
"The beauty is that all their products irrespective of the brand name they are intended for." or:
"Helping to keep cost down." or:
"The range of its tilt ability." Or this entire paragraph:
"When you first connect the flash to the camera. And both are switched on. A little camera symbol appears in the bottom left of the screen. To emphasise that the connection is made. A nice touch. The screen has good viewing even at acute angles."