If critique is allowed, I see a lot of designs that might be better without incorporating kit lenses.
There's one in particular that I really like, but if there's a focus index coming right up from the front hem labeled '18-55mm' it's *possible* some of the boys might not find that a social asset. When they wear that. And if I can spot that, surely others will.
(Also, with this crowd, I suggest understatement. There's the bright red on black and white to grab the attention, and there's what this crowd might actually wear. We've been through this a few times now. My own tastes might run to the near-illegible, but I think a lot of the people who might wear swag at all may want for tan and grey a lot. )
Also, for the gals, I nominate Magkelly's avvie.