Originally posted by slip I feel that the first one would have been better if the hands weren't cropped out.
Catch lights in the eyes would have gone a long way in all the pics IMHO. As a pro he should have know how to position her to have catch lights or used a tiny bit of flash to put a bit of sparkle in her eyes.
F4 would have been a wiser choice.
I find your first shot was excellent and the only thing that could be improved in the last one is if you put her further away from the background and at least give it some blur. Maybe a simple background?
Anyways by the looks of these pics yours stand above the pros
BTW I looked over the pros pics again and the shadows in her eyes are not the most flattering
Randy
Thanks, Randy. On my second photo, you're right. She was leaning on the fence and almost got the slats in focus. Our blue trash bin is also visible in the background between the slats
Originally posted by sergysergy The ones you took look definitely sharper than the others.
I wish I brought the 50-135 with me during the shoot.
Originally posted by darylk I first thought that maybe the photographer slid the clarity slider way left trying to soften things, but as I study it further, I think the camera focus calibration is way off. In the first shot it appears that your wife's bracelet is in focus, indicating to me that the camera was front focusing by quite a lot. Shooting at such wide apertures (especially f/1.4 on the pro's last shot) on full frame makes things even worse. I think the only remedy would be a reshoot - these photos aren't salvageable unless downsized and used as little thumbnails on a web page.
That's my 2 cents...
Daryl
Thanks, Daryl. Unfortunately you're right, these photos aren't salvageable, maybe if he converts them to B&W? I don't know.
Originally posted by VisualDarkness Focus is too far infront on every one of the "pro" shots, on the first one it is acceptable but not good. The full body one is amazingly blurry and a weird compostition.
....I can't get past that door....
Originally posted by micromacro Unforgivable.
Change the style and do fashion shooting of your beautiful wife.
If she has paid for a pro makeup, that was a waste with a pro photographer. Seriously, why bother to put a makeup with such a result. Your work is definitely better. I like however the third picture, perhaps you can come back to that place and do better job.
Unfortunately yes, she did pay for a pro makeup. Actually, we're thinking of re-shooting at the same location with me doing it instead - changing my style
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aleonx3 - don't be sorry. I heard the disappointment in my wife's voice when she mentioned she got the photos. Sure enough when I saw them...