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BraveRoy · 05-26-2014, 05:27 PM

manntax · 05-27-2014, 05:14 AM

Gorgeous model , gorgeous light - but why or why the composition has gone so astray ? it would be much better if she was moved to the right and she had some extra space in the direction of her looking. I think the idea and setting as well as model and light are superb here. Also the processing is what I love about it. The composition wise it is rather disappointing - also her facial expression is not matched with the setting/overall mood. Good luck with some further attempts !
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BraveRoy · 05-30-2014, 08:14 PM

Originally posted by manntax

Gorgeous model , gorgeous light - but why or why the composition has gone so astray ? it would be much better if she was moved to the right and she had some extra space in the direction of her looking. I think the idea and setting as well as model and light are superb here. Also the processing is what I love about it. The composition wise it is rather disappointing - also her facial expression is not matched with the setting/overall mood. Good luck with some further attempts !
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' >' manntax

Thank you....@^^@

DonThomaso · 06-02-2014, 10:50 AM

I nominate this photo. I like the soft tone and colors, and the somewhat strange setting. It has a sort of snapshot quality too it, since the composition and facial expression is not "perfect", but it is allowed in this kind of pictures (if the photographer is aware of it).

05-26-2014, 05:27 PM	#1
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05-27-2014, 05:14 AM	#2
manntax Veteran Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Photos: Albums Posts: 1,972	Gorgeous model , gorgeous light - but why or why the composition has gone so astray ? it would be much better if she was moved to the right and she had some extra space in the direction of her looking. I think the idea and setting as well as model and light are superb here. Also the processing is what I love about it. The composition wise it is rather disappointing - also her facial expression is not matched with the setting/overall mood. Good luck with some further attempts ! ,,, ' >' manntax

05-30-2014, 08:14 PM	#3
BraveRoy New Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Photos: Gallery Posts: 6 Original Poster	Originally posted by manntax Gorgeous model , gorgeous light - but why or why the composition has gone so astray ? it would be much better if she was moved to the right and she had some extra space in the direction of her looking. I think the idea and setting as well as model and light are superb here. Also the processing is what I love about it. The composition wise it is rather disappointing - also her facial expression is not matched with the setting/overall mood. Good luck with some further attempts ! ,,, ' >' manntax Thank you....@^^@

06-02-2014, 10:50 AM	#4
DonThomaso Pentaxian Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: Skåne, Sweden Photos: Gallery Posts: 482	I nominate this photo. I like the soft tone and colors, and the somewhat strange setting. It has a sort of snapshot quality too it, since the composition and facial expression is not "perfect", but it is allowed in this kind of pictures (if the photographer is aware of it).