Originally posted by SoonerCaniac I guess my eye isn't well-trained to spot the "poor technique" and distortion because I think this is a wonderful pano!
IMO, from someone who has never see the park in person, I rather like the composition and lighting! I think the wide-angle offers a unique perspective.
Well done!
Thank you! I'm glad you like the pano! Actually I intended the pano to include more of the pathways in the foreground, leading to the distance (the end of tunnel should have been on around the bottom right intersection of the rule of thirds) to emphasize the sense of depth and the abundance of the Shirafuji flower racemes dangling down. But since I used the DA 21mm lens, the pathway in the foreground is pretty much distorted. Also since I didn't overlap enough when taking the pictures, when merged in photoshop the resulting picture visually doesn't make much sense with the straight pathway getting warped. The distortion on the bamboo bar & pole joint on the left (with the weirdly angled, uneven-sized tube lamp on top of it) is a remnant of the problematic distortion that I'm still unable to correct in PP. So the result is a picture that's quite different than what I envisioned in my mind.
But yeah, all in all, this picture is easily one of my favorites too, with all the lessons learned - and also the memories! I was among the 5 or 6 photography enthusiasts (mostly Japanese) who patiently waited until the park's almost closed, set up our gears, took pictures, and then ran like hell to the train station so we don't miss the last train to Tokyo. Those were good times
I would really recommend visiting Ashikaga Flower Park if you ever go to Japan in late April / early May. Tickets and lodging are quite cheaper since the Sakura season has ended (Sakura blooms around late March to mid April), the park is easily accessible by train, and the park itself is a macro paradise during the day and at night their majestic wisterias and the illumination are nothing short of astounding!
Here's my first attempt at making pano (6 photos from K-3 II & DA 21mm, stitched with photoshop), with one of the park's oldest Wisteria as the subject: