Originally posted by Rupert
When I got home and downloaded, I was happy with some, but not with the majority. ...
Well, I would say for starters that THAT feeling is pretty common. I seem to recall Ansel Adams saying something like, if you take a couple photos a YEAR that you feel like keeping, you're doing pretty good.
Quote: I will continue to learn and eventually get better, but the hard reality is that I am much better at shooting squirrels and birds than I am at people. This is one of my better ones, and yes, it has problems! Do you ever feel this way about your level of competence?
Sure. But let's look at your photo. I have a number of comments.
The photo isn't bad and you should not beat yourself up. It could be improved with a little targeted post-processing. You didn't say what you used to process the photo, but if it were me, in Adobe Lightroom, I'd probably boost the blacks setting +1 or +2, increase the clarity +10, perhaps goose vibrance a bit, and use the curve to lighten midtones or perhaps even use the adjustment brush to brighten the young man's face.
The easy technicalities A couple of simple technical points. Looks like the photo was taken late afternoon. If you can avoid it, this is usually a pretty bad time to try to take portraits outside. I try to drag portrait subjects out of bed early in the a.m. Shooting later in the afternoon, when the sun gets low again, can also work. If you must shoot midday, overcast days may be better than bright sunny days. It looks to me like you have part of the subject's face in shade and part in bright light - something you should try to avoid.
I note also that you shot at 170mm focal length, ISO 400 and f/6.3, and that you used your flash on this shot. At that focal length, my guess is that you were a good distance from the subject. On a bright day, did the flash do anything at all? I think I'd have skipped the flash and used a wider aperture - f/4 perhaps. Nothing inherently wrong with the focal length but it is a bit long. I stick to somewhere from, oh, 28mm to 100mm (on a K20D), depending on what I want to do. My 50 f/1.4 is my official "portrait" lens. Why? Because it's my fastest lens, but also because it lets me stay close enough to the subject to interact, to direct the subject, make the subject feel at ease, and close enough for flash to help. Finally, I do wonder why you shot at ISO 400. Don't know that it made a big difference to this photo, but if you're outside and the light's decent, you should be able to shoot at ISO 100 or 200. Want to do outdoor portraiture? The cliche instructions are: go early, use a roughly 70mm lens (on a K20D), shoot with a wide aperture, and keep the ISO down.
Were you shooting in Auto mode? (Looks like you were.) For portraits, I'd suggest switching to Av so you can set the aperture wide. (P mode works fine too on a K10D/K20D because you can get into effective aperture-priority mode by moving the rear e-dial.)
The hard stuff
Now I'll be honest: I don't think those the technical cliches are nearly as important as the more intangible elements of portraiture. The reason it's difficult to shoot people who KNOW that you're shooting them, is that most people get a bit nervous in front of the camera, much the way they get nervous when asked to speak in public, and the camera really picks that up. It's therefore terribly important for the photographer to be able to put subjects at ease - or more correctly, to be able to put subjects into a mood that's good for photography. (I say this because I've seen a couple GREAT portraits where the photographer seems to have deliberately made the subject angry just before the shot. Whatever works.) You need to know if you've got a smiler, a laugher, a tough guy, cool dude, dreamer, deep thinker, or curmudgeon, to name just a few of the possibilities. This may be a skill that can't be taught. I myself am not nearly as good at this as I want to be, and I've been working at it for a long time. I do best when I have a photogenic subject who meets me more than half way.
Did you use a tripod? When I shoot portraits, if at all possible, I use a tripod, not because it's technically so important, but because with the camera on a tripod, I can work in two steps. First, I make sure I've got the shot composed well, exposure right, focus, etc., and then second, I can put all of my attention into LOOKING at the subject, talking to the subject, waiting for what looks like the right instant to snap the shutter. A cable-release is also critical for this approach. Subjects also seem less threatened by a camera on a tripod than by a camera with somebody looking at them through the finder. Shooting with a tripod, I can look 'em in the eye myself, joke with them, not tell 'em when I'm going to trip the shutter - and then click that shutter when they give me the look I want. It's hard to do with group shots, because you have to worry about everybody's eyes being open. But with individuals, surprise can really be your friend.
The subject is clearly a very handsome young man, but his pose at the moment of capture, I think, is weak and not very interesting. His mouth is open in a way that isn't terribly attractive - lot of teeth. This may be a natural look for him, but if I had noticed this while shooting, I would have tried getting him either to smile or to close his mouth and not smile. You have to see this stuff while you're shooting. In order to really look at the subject, you have to be so completely comfortable with the technicalities of taking the photo that you don't have to waste any mental energy on them.
In the final analysis, the camera and your exposure settings are a trivial part of the job here - not unimportant, but pretty close. What matters most is either having a photogenic subject or - more often - interacting with your subject so that you put them at ease and make them as photogenic as possible. And finally, LOOKING for a moment when they smile spontaneously and naturally and clicking the shutter right at that instant.
It's not that hard to do decently, but it is really hard to do really well.
Will