Architecture Simple geometry

mba1971 · 06-19-2010, 08:41 PM

Vacation picture, atrium ceiling bu nignt

mba1971 · 06-19-2010, 08:43 PM

Sorry!

**Ash** · 06-19-2010, 10:45 PM

I like the result - the patterns as well as the effect of the tungsten lighting on the textured wood look good, and well rendered in this image.

My critique would be to have perhaps found a way to frame the image not to include the top right corner edge of the atrium - or clone it out.

Otherwise a keeper.

mba1971 · 06-20-2010, 09:17 PM

Thanks! Keep it I will!

**Ash** · 06-21-2010, 12:01 AM

Perhaps even a slight adjustment of white balance, pushing it towards a cooler temperature, may help limit the burning out of high light intensity areas in the frame.

K-9 · 06-21-2010, 06:06 AM

I like the warmth and abstract shape. As Ash said, a slight zoom/crop would take away the upper corner differences in lighting and shapes, and just keep the more uniform central portion.

06-19-2010, 08:41 PM	#1
mba1971 Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Smalltown, Quebec Photos: Albums Posts: 179	Simple geometry Lens: Sigma 17-70 2.8-4 DC macro Camera: Pentax K7 Photo Location: Playa Del Carmen, Mexico ISO: 1600 Shutter Speed: 1/15s Aperture: F2.8 Vacation picture, atrium ceiling bu nignt

06-19-2010, 08:43 PM	#2
mba1971 Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Smalltown, Quebec Photos: Albums Posts: 179 Original Poster	Simple geometry (again) Sorry!

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06-19-2010, 10:45 PM	#3
Ash Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Toowoomba, Queensland Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 23,920	I like the result - the patterns as well as the effect of the tungsten lighting on the textured wood look good, and well rendered in this image. My critique would be to have perhaps found a way to frame the image not to include the top right corner edge of the atrium - or clone it out. Otherwise a keeper.

06-20-2010, 09:17 PM	#4
mba1971 Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Smalltown, Quebec Photos: Albums Posts: 179 Original Poster	Thanks! Keep it I will!

06-21-2010, 12:01 AM	#5
Ash Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Toowoomba, Queensland Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 23,920	Perhaps even a slight adjustment of white balance, pushing it towards a cooler temperature, may help limit the burning out of high light intensity areas in the frame.

06-21-2010, 06:06 AM	#6
K-9 Veteran Member Join Date: May 2009 Location: USA Photos: Albums Posts: 1,971	I like the warmth and abstract shape. As Ash said, a slight zoom/crop would take away the upper corner differences in lighting and shapes, and just keep the more uniform central portion.