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froggertwenty · 06-28-2010, 08:17 AM

Some critique would be very appreciated no matter how small. Im looking to advance as a photographer. No hard feelings

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Adam · 06-28-2010, 10:07 AM

I like the idea behind the second shot! I would have worked better if the yard lines were just a bit clearer, and I'm sure this can be accomplished in photoshop. BTW, you should post photos in a larger resolution so that we can better judge them

froggertwenty · 06-28-2010, 10:59 AM

You can view the full resolution if you follow the link at the bottom. I didn't want to post them too large. But how would I go about clarifying the yard lines? I have Picasa and Gimp (Photoshop's not in the budget yet)

06-28-2010, 08:17 AM	#1
froggertwenty Inactive Account Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Buffalo, NY Posts: 13	Some first shots Lens: DAL 18-55 Camera: K-x Some critique would be very appreciated no matter how small. Im looking to advance as a photographer. No hard feelings LINK TO FULL GALLERY http://picasaweb.google.com/110614463626310022592

06-28-2010, 10:07 AM	#2
Adam Administrator Site Webmaster Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Arizona Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 51,609	I like the idea behind the second shot! I would have worked better if the yard lines were just a bit clearer, and I'm sure this can be accomplished in photoshop. BTW, you should post photos in a larger resolution so that we can better judge them Adam PentaxForums.com Webmaster (Site Usage Guide \| Site Help \| My Photography) PentaxForums.com server and development costs are user-supported. You can help cover these costs by donating or purchasing one of our Pentax eBooks. Or, buy your photo gear from our affiliates, Adorama, B&H Photo, KEH, or Topaz Labs, and get FREE Marketplace access - click here to see how! Trusted Pentax retailers:

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06-28-2010, 10:59 AM	#3
froggertwenty Inactive Account Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Buffalo, NY Posts: 13 Original Poster	You can view the full resolution if you follow the link at the bottom. I didn't want to post them too large. But how would I go about clarifying the yard lines? I have Picasa and Gimp (Photoshop's not in the budget yet)

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