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candgpics · 06-30-2010, 06:34 PM

Shutter actually was 1/100 and aperture was 6.3.

Last edited by candgpics; 11-20-2011 at 12:37 AM.

clark · 06-30-2010, 06:41 PM

the form is lovely, but the model looks slightly bored if i'm being honest

also the lighting on the face is a little too contrasty- either lighten it up in post or use a reflector to fill in

captmacq · 06-30-2010, 06:56 PM

litlle hot on the shirt but great shot otherwise

sir.b · 07-05-2010, 02:33 PM

the shirt creates a shape that is not that flattering/sensual in this shot
very superhero, but doesn't work here

clark · 07-06-2010, 10:27 AM

Originally posted by sir.b

the shirt creates a shape that is not that flattering/sensual in this shot
very superhero, but doesn't work here

agreed

would probably have worked better (been more visually balanced) if the shirt had just the one button done up in the centre and then pinned at the back so the bottom hem opens up

too much overexposed shirt, not enough stomach

**Aristophanes** · 07-06-2010, 03:49 PM

Shirt is fine. Bikini underneath is not part of the mood. Under a business blouse you want lace lingerie. It looks like she's wearing a contrived outfit for a seductive pose. Therefore her pose is not natural a her clothing is not. IMO

Shirt overexposed. Not enough yummy. Nice legs.

06-30-2010, 06:34 PM	#1
candgpics Veteran Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Maine, USA Posts: 394	Figure Lens: 16-50 DA* Camera: k7 ISO: 100 Shutter Speed: 1/125s Aperture: F6.7 Shutter actually was 1/100 and aperture was 6.3. Last edited by candgpics; 11-20-2011 at 12:37 AM.

06-30-2010, 06:41 PM	#2
clark Inactive Account Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 301	the form is lovely, but the model looks slightly bored if i'm being honest also the lighting on the face is a little too contrasty- either lighten it up in post or use a reflector to fill in Last edited by clark; 06-30-2010 at 07:08 PM.

07-06-2010, 10:27 AM	#5
clark Inactive Account Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 301	Originally posted by sir.b the shirt creates a shape that is not that flattering/sensual in this shot very superhero, but doesn't work here agreed would probably have worked better (been more visually balanced) if the shirt had just the one button done up in the centre and then pinned at the back so the bottom hem opens up too much overexposed shirt, not enough stomach Last edited by clark; 07-06-2010 at 10:50 AM.

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