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09-12-2010, 09:00 PM   #1
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A Walk in the Woods
Lens: Super-Takumar 55/1.8 Camera: Spotmatic II Photo Location: Salem, NH ISO: 400 

HP5 in DD-x (1+4), scanned with Nikon Coolscan 5000ED, adjusted slightly in Lightroom 3.



09-13-2010, 06:25 AM   #2
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well, for me is just a nice family photo...

If it would've been for something else, definitely clothes should've been different...

Composition is nice, we feel that is in the forest..
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I'd like to see more contrast. Perhaps in post-processing, maybe drawn in levels a bit . . .
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09-13-2010, 09:01 PM   #5
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A better result, but again, what is the message in the photo you were trying to convey?
The B&W conversion itself is quite dull, and the composition rather ordinary.
It does appear to be a sharp image, though.
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