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10-05-2010, 04:50 AM   #1
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[langtitle=fr]Une plage encombrée[/langtitle]
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En me promenant sur la plage Napoléon j'ai vu ce tronc d'arbre et j'ai pensé qu'il ferait bien en photo




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This looks a bit soft to me, and the colors in the sky seem artificial. For starters, that should be fixed. The other thing that doesn't work here is the composition- the bullseyed log seems out of place and not interesting at all!

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Adam is right.
But more than those basics, lighting was not in your favour.
The harsh sun produces high contrast, flat textures, washed out colours, unflattering shadows and ordinary rendition in general. The same shot with a different camera angle and perspective taken at dusk or sunrise on a tripod would produce an aesthetically more pleasing result.
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Merci Adam et Ash
Adam, je ne comprend pas trop le texte, problème de traduction
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L'autre chose qui ne fonctionne pas voici la composition-le journal bullseyed semble hors de propos et pas intéressant du tout!


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