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10-20-2010, 07:56 AM   #1
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Revisiting an old graveyard
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I took this photo a couple of years ago. But, I recently decided to give it a second pass, this time as a black and white image.



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10-20-2010, 10:19 AM   #2
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The spotlight effect is a bit distracting as it looks artificial for the location. I'd like to see more detail of the headstone on the right. Might crop a tad tighter.
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Thanks for the comment. There is no spotlight being used though. It is all natural light. However, there is a lot of contrast in the picture. I kind of like the it that way. But, I think it is a subjective call. What I do wonder about is if I should have straighten the grave stones a bit.
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I like it just as it is. If you wanted the detail on the headstone to be the focus point of this photo, I am sure you would have done a better job of that. I see the "graveyard" you see, and the B+W gives it that somber mood.
Well done!

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