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CWyatt · 10-24-2010, 01:39 PM

Interested in whether you think the crop works or the original is a better composition. Ta.

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anzarzaidi · 10-24-2010, 02:17 PM

The crop does make the picture better, I would recommend you to crop it a bit more.

SpecialK · 10-24-2010, 05:30 PM

I like the original better, but it does not wow me...

**rparmar** · 10-24-2010, 07:18 PM

I like them both, but am a sucker for these sort of formal shots.

EyeSpy · 10-24-2010, 07:32 PM

The crop works for me.

goddo31 · 10-24-2010, 07:47 PM

The crop works for me, I find the power pole in the original way too much of a distraction from the plane. Nice shot!

Myn.pheos · 10-25-2010, 07:58 AM

I think cropped version is better. Much cleaner,

Class A · 10-26-2010, 08:03 PM

I much prefer the crop but I'd increase the contrast. I find the grey of the sky to be too muddy.

Ehlacore · 10-26-2010, 08:47 PM

I like the 2nd one better... I know most photographers frown on clutter (less is more right?), but those lines dont make since to me in the 1st shot... the second one gives it more substance.

If you just shot the plane without anything in the forground it would just be a boring plane, so in this case I glad for the "clutter"

10-24-2010, 01:39 PM	#1
CWyatt Veteran Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 1,291	Aeroplane and lines Interested in whether you think the crop works or the original is a better composition. Ta. . . . . . . . .

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10-24-2010, 02:17 PM	#2
anzarzaidi Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Princeton NJ Photos: Albums Posts: 26	The crop does make the picture better, I would recommend you to crop it a bit more.

10-24-2010, 05:30 PM	#3
SpecialK Pentaxian Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: So California Photos: Gallery Posts: 16,482	I like the original better, but it does not wow me...

10-24-2010, 07:18 PM	#4
rparmar Site Supporter Join Date: Jan 2008 Photos: Gallery Posts: 8,823	I like them both, but am a sucker for these sort of formal shots.

10-24-2010, 07:32 PM	#5
EyeSpy Veteran Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Arizona Photos: Albums Posts: 663	The crop works for me.

10-24-2010, 07:47 PM	#6
goddo31 Veteran Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Perth, Western Australia Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 2,576	The crop works for me, I find the power pole in the original way too much of a distraction from the plane. Nice shot!

10-25-2010, 07:58 AM	#7
Myn.pheos Inactive Account Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Slovakia Posts: 31	I think cropped version is better. Much cleaner,

10-26-2010, 08:03 PM	#8
Class A Pentaxian Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Wellington, New Zealand Posts: 11,251	I much prefer the crop but I'd increase the contrast. I find the grey of the sky to be too muddy.

10-26-2010, 08:47 PM	#9
Ehlacore Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Niigata, Japan Posts: 172	I like the 2nd one better... I know most photographers frown on clutter (less is more right?), but those lines dont make since to me in the 1st shot... the second one gives it more substance. If you just shot the plane without anything in the forground it would just be a boring plane, so in this case I glad for the "clutter"

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