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candgpics · 11-21-2010, 10:04 AM

ISO actually was 140.

Post in CS4 and OnOne Phototools Professional. This was another dry ice fog image that did not work as originally as planned, but I thought I would try to work on it in post as Kelsey was so great to work with I wanted to try to get her a few images. Most of my shots using the dry ice did not work out. I will try to fix the mistakes for my next shoot.

Last edited by candgpics; 11-21-2010 at 04:52 PM.

candgpics · 11-21-2010, 10:11 AM

Whoops!!! Here is the image. Sorry about that

**Miguel** · 11-21-2010, 07:09 PM

I like just about everything about this image. Her look and body language is memorable, just excellent. Your choice of clothing and its placement works so well with the vertical frame. The model is beautiful, but not in a common way.

I also like the processing tricks. The tone and edging come off well--a lot of times this stuff look gimmicky, but not here.

The only improvement may be toning down the lighting a wee hair on her right breast.

You done good.

M

candgpics · 11-21-2010, 08:39 PM

Thanx so much again. Kelsey is tall and statuesque and very down to earth and easy to work with. This was one of the better poses that I cold work with given the dry ice did not work as planned.

Thank you again for the comments.

pickles · 11-22-2010, 12:58 AM

If I'm gonna look at nudes...then I like to look at nudes.....nude bodies!!!!
So, I like to look at whole bodies.
Sorry, but that's just the way I feel.
Cheers, Pickles.

janstew · 11-22-2010, 12:43 PM

I like the PP and sepia tones.
But there seems to be a 4 boob thing happening? The bra needs to be pushed up a bit otherwise it looks like she has 4 boobs........because she has raised her arms in a strapless bra......the boobs moved but the bra didnt
cheers
Jan

**Ash** · 11-24-2010, 02:18 PM

Yep, my first thought was the bra was riding too far down her chest.
Being a light coloured bra it reflects a little too much light and made it look a little too bright.
Otherwise I like your lighting work here as well.

candgpics · 11-24-2010, 03:03 PM

Thanx so much for the comments. Generally, I am happy with this image, but appreciate everyone's point of view.

11-21-2010, 10:04 AM	#1
candgpics Veteran Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Maine, USA Posts: 394	Another Beauty Image/Not Work Safe Lens: DA* 16-50 Camera: K20d Photo Location: Central Maine, USA ISO: 100 Shutter Speed: 1/180s Aperture: F6.7 ISO actually was 140. Post in CS4 and OnOne Phototools Professional. This was another dry ice fog image that did not work as originally as planned, but I thought I would try to work on it in post as Kelsey was so great to work with I wanted to try to get her a few images. Most of my shots using the dry ice did not work out. I will try to fix the mistakes for my next shoot. Last edited by candgpics; 11-21-2010 at 04:52 PM.

11-21-2010, 10:11 AM	#2
candgpics Veteran Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Maine, USA Posts: 394 Original Poster	Whoops!!! Here is the image. Sorry about that Last edited by candgpics; 11-20-2011 at 12:34 AM.

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candgpics Veteran Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Maine, USA Posts: 394 Original Poster	Thanx so much again. Kelsey is tall and statuesque and very down to earth and easy to work with. This was one of the better poses that I cold work with given the dry ice did not work as planned. Thank you again for the comments.

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janstew Veteran Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Forbes Central West NSW Posts: 311	I like the PP and sepia tones. But there seems to be a 4 boob thing happening? The bra needs to be pushed up a bit otherwise it looks like she has 4 boobs........because she has raised her arms in a strapless bra......the boobs moved but the bra didnt cheers Jan

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Ash Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Toowoomba, Queensland Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 23,920	Yep, my first thought was the bra was riding too far down her chest. Being a light coloured bra it reflects a little too much light and made it look a little too bright. Otherwise I like your lighting work here as well.

11-24-2010, 03:03 PM	#8
candgpics Veteran Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Maine, USA Posts: 394 Original Poster	Thanx so much for the comments. Generally, I am happy with this image, but appreciate everyone's point of view.

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