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12-07-2010, 11:22 PM   #1
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Baby Human and Baby Tiger
Lens: SMC Pentax M 50mm f 1:1.7 Camera: Pentax ME Photo Location: Jakarta ISO: 200 

a baby played with baby tiger at Ragunan Zoo, Jakarta Indonesia



what do you think guys?
need your tips and critique

12-08-2010, 12:13 AM   #2
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Cute little pussy cat.
This is more a happy family snapshot than a photo for critiquing.
But for one thing, consider the rule of thirds in these types of images, so there isn't the empty space on the right of the cat adding nothing to the image.
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thanks for your tips Ash,,

yeah, i just saw a family with their baby played with the cats.. and i thought i didn't wanna miss that moment
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I trust Mrs. Tiger was not around? :-) As for cc, try cropping off some of empty space (as far as interesting stuff goes) at right?

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i've tried to crop the empty space..and this is the results



does it look better?

thx for your suggestion, jolepp
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Much better IMO :-)
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