Nature Un étang un soir

loule · 12-11-2010, 05:12 AM

Un soir en me baladant près d'Entressen en Provence j'ai admiré ce petit étang et j'ai fais quelques photos

Last edited by loule; 12-11-2010 at 06:14 AM.

**Canada_Rockies** · 12-11-2010, 10:00 AM

Beautiful colours in that picture. It shows how the K10D sensor comes into its own at low ISO.

Daniel_r · 12-11-2010, 11:58 AM

It's a beautiful picture.

**Ash** · 12-11-2010, 02:07 PM

Nice scene captured here.
If there's any critique from me, it would be centred on the cluttering of the scene the dry grass stalks have created in the bottom right of the frame, getting in the way of the other important foreground elements.
The cloud formations are also unimpressive, so next time move the clouds to make a more dramatic sky.

Also, the time of day of the capture means that the scene rendered is not 'special' given the daytime sunshine lighting the scene quite ordinarily.

Sparkle · 12-11-2010, 04:26 PM

"La beauté est dans l'œil du spectateur." A mes yeux, la photographie est très belle. Peut-être il pourrait être amélioré si la moitié du ciel a été retiré. Grands travaux.

**Miguel** · 12-11-2010, 07:38 PM

Pretty colors indeed. The sky should be cropped down 15%.

Overall, I seen nothing very compelling about the shot. What is the subject?

M

loule · 12-12-2010, 01:18 AM

Merci messieurs
C'est vrai que l'avant plan est un peu encombré mais qu'il était difficile de faire autrement pour garder ce prolongement qui mène vers le fond de l'étang et le ciel.
Le ciel manque d'intensité dramatique, je dois refaire cette photo avec plus de nuages.

smf · 12-13-2010, 05:21 AM

Although the range of blues in the sky is appealing, I agree with Miguel that the beautiful photo is more successful if cropped down a bit from the top.

loule · 12-13-2010, 07:19 AM

Merci smf

**Clinton** · 12-13-2010, 08:35 AM

Originally posted by Ash

Nice scene captured here.
If there's any critique from me, it would be centred on the cluttering of the scene the dry grass stalks have created in the bottom right of the frame, getting in the way of the other important foreground elements.

Heh, My eye is finding it the opposite.

I really like the grass in the lower right but I find the tree in the foreground of the left to be a bit distracting. Can you go cut that tree down and shoot it again?

loule · 12-13-2010, 09:50 AM

Merci Clinton pour ton avis éclairé

Rupert · 12-15-2010, 07:03 PM

I too would crop a little off the sky and then print and hang it...it's a Winner!
Best Regards!

loule · 12-16-2010, 01:03 AM

Merci du conseil Rupert

12-11-2010, 05:12 AM	#1
loule Senior Member Join Date: May 2010 Location: fos sur mer Photos: Gallery Posts: 120	[langtitle=fr]Un étang un soir[/langtitle] Lens: DA 35mm f:2.8 macro Camera: K 10D Photo Location: Entressen ISO: 100 Shutter Speed: 1/350s Aperture: F8 Un soir en me baladant près d'Entressen en Provence j'ai admiré ce petit étang et j'ai fais quelques photos Last edited by loule; 12-11-2010 at 06:14 AM.

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Canada_Rockies Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Sparwood, BC, Canada Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 12,385	Beautiful colours in that picture. It shows how the K10D sensor comes into its own at low ISO.

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Daniel_r Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Saskatchewan Posts: 108	It's a beautiful picture.

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Ash Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Toowoomba, Queensland Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 23,920	Nice scene captured here. If there's any critique from me, it would be centred on the cluttering of the scene the dry grass stalks have created in the bottom right of the frame, getting in the way of the other important foreground elements. The cloud formations are also unimpressive, so next time move the clouds to make a more dramatic sky. Also, the time of day of the capture means that the scene rendered is not 'special' given the daytime sunshine lighting the scene quite ordinarily.

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Sparkle Inactive Account Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Halifax, Nova Scotia Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 1,521	"La beauté est dans l'œil du spectateur." A mes yeux, la photographie est très belle. Peut-être il pourrait être amélioré si la moitié du ciel a été retiré. Grands travaux.

12-11-2010, 07:38 PM	#6
Miguel Site Supporter Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Near Seattle Photos: Gallery Posts: 2,743	Pretty colors indeed. The sky should be cropped down 15%. Overall, I seen nothing very compelling about the shot. What is the subject? M

12-12-2010, 01:18 AM	#7
loule Senior Member Join Date: May 2010 Location: fos sur mer Photos: Gallery Posts: 120 Original Poster	Merci messieurs C'est vrai que l'avant plan est un peu encombré mais qu'il était difficile de faire autrement pour garder ce prolongement qui mène vers le fond de l'étang et le ciel. Le ciel manque d'intensité dramatique, je dois refaire cette photo avec plus de nuages.

12-13-2010, 05:21 AM	#8
smf Pentaxian Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Midland, MI Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 4,083	Although the range of blues in the sky is appealing, I agree with Miguel that the beautiful photo is more successful if cropped down a bit from the top.

12-13-2010, 07:19 AM	#9
loule Senior Member Join Date: May 2010 Location: fos sur mer Photos: Gallery Posts: 120 Original Poster	Merci smf

12-13-2010, 08:35 AM	#10
Clinton Site Supporter Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Salt Lake City, UT Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 1,910	Originally posted by Ash Nice scene captured here. If there's any critique from me, it would be centred on the cluttering of the scene the dry grass stalks have created in the bottom right of the frame, getting in the way of the other important foreground elements. Heh, My eye is finding it the opposite. I really like the grass in the lower right but I find the tree in the foreground of the left to be a bit distracting. Can you go cut that tree down and shoot it again?

12-13-2010, 09:50 AM	#11
loule Senior Member Join Date: May 2010 Location: fos sur mer Photos: Gallery Posts: 120 Original Poster	Merci Clinton pour ton avis éclairé

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Rupert Veteran Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Texas Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 25,123	I too would crop a little off the sky and then print and hang it...it's a Winner! Best Regards!

12-16-2010, 01:03 AM	#13
loule Senior Member Join Date: May 2010 Location: fos sur mer Photos: Gallery Posts: 120 Original Poster	Merci du conseil Rupert

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