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12-13-2010, 04:00 AM   #1
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Lens: Pentax M28mm f2.0 Camera: GX-10 Photo Location: Melbourne, Australia ISO: 100 Shutter Speed: 1/10s Aperture: F2.8 

the local train station


12-13-2010, 04:41 AM   #2
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Nice picture Liam.
12-13-2010, 05:09 AM   #3
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I like it -- especially with inclusion of the solitary person. Perhaps I would have focused on that person. On my monitor, it appears the point of sharpest focus is far more distant -- perhaps that horizontal structure with the diamonds.
12-13-2010, 01:11 PM   #4
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Hi Liam.
Decent capture at this resolution.
The balance of colours is slightly off (too tungsten in train station) and the sky is well overexposed particularly at the frame left. There are also a number of 'possible' subjects in the image that makes it difficult to know the intent or idea of the photo.

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It may be my monitor, but everything appears much too dark. The orange (tungsten) can probably be toned down in post processing or by changing to another effect. Nice shot. I have some spare time these days so I spend some here.
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On my monitor, I see the blues in the sky with too much cyan. I would like its hue more towards the (deep) blues, but what the hell do I know?

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