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02-04-2011, 09:15 AM   #1
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I am going through a bunch of photos lately on my days off from work. I love this site for the great feedback I've gotten on other pictures. This is a picture of our daughter, it was February and overcast- the original was color and I rendered in B&W.

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02-04-2011, 12:37 PM   #2
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Hi Ryan:

This is obviously a keeper, but I think it may benefit from upping the contrast, and also cropping off the bottom to just above the lump of sand in the middle.
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Ryan, there are instances where centrally arranging the subject in a frame is indicated, breaking the fundamental rule of thirds in composition. In this image though, it doesn't quite work well. Nevertheless the B&W conversion is well done - I agree the contrast could be increased further and cropping would certainly help improve the impact of the image - she is a little too small in the frame.

As the old adage says - if your pictures aren't good enough, you're not close enough.
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