Misc Narcisse

Camos1313 · 02-05-2011, 03:10 PM

After some C&C I made some adjustment on the background and the reflection.... here is the final version!

Manel Brand · 02-06-2011, 04:51 AM

Interesting.

I would suggest removal of the white frame line; I think it diminishes the strength of Narcissus.

The water ripples could be less pronounced or even absent.

Finally, let us not forget about healthy narcissism... LOL

Cheers

marbi · 02-06-2011, 05:14 AM

Wow, I like that!

Good light, good composition, very interesting idea!

**Ash** · 02-06-2011, 07:04 PM

Well done.
The water ripples are OK to be there IMO, but indeed not so strong an effect.
From this resolution it's hard to tell, but the focus may be on the edge of the water trough while the head of the figure is a little blurry. Stopping down further would have overcome this.

**Scottnorwo** · 02-06-2011, 09:27 PM

A very nice composition. See even a dummy can take a good photo.

**Fontan** · 02-06-2011, 09:27 PM

Likewise, I would like to see this without ripples.

02-05-2011, 03:10 PM	#1
Camos1313 Inactive Account Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Montreal Posts: 74	Narcisse Lens: 18-135 Camera: k20d After some C&C I made some adjustment on the background and the reflection.... here is the final version!

02-06-2011, 04:51 AM	#2
Manel Brand Veteran Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Porto Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 853	Interesting. I would suggest removal of the white frame line; I think it diminishes the strength of Narcissus. The water ripples could be less pronounced or even absent. Finally, let us not forget about healthy narcissism... LOL Cheers

02-06-2011, 05:14 AM	#3
marbi Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Photos: Gallery Posts: 31	Wow, I like that! Good light, good composition, very interesting idea!

02-06-2011, 07:04 PM	#4
Ash Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Toowoomba, Queensland Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 23,920	Well done. The water ripples are OK to be there IMO, but indeed not so strong an effect. From this resolution it's hard to tell, but the focus may be on the edge of the water trough while the head of the figure is a little blurry. Stopping down further would have overcome this.

02-06-2011, 09:27 PM	#5
Scottnorwo Millionth Poster! Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Stafford, New York Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 3,086	A very nice composition. See even a dummy can take a good photo.

02-06-2011, 09:27 PM	#6
Fontan Site Supporter Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: 5th floor Posts: 1,610	Likewise, I would like to see this without ripples.