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Brighthelmstone10 · 02-12-2011, 04:38 AM

Lewes Ladies vs Beckenham, 30 January 2011

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**Fries** · 02-12-2011, 05:33 AM

Somehow I had to smile when this photo appeared on my screen... Nice work! But there are possibly two things that would (perhaps) make this shot a bit better.
1. I think de crop is a bit to tight. Perhaps a little bit more space on the right and even more on the left. Since you have isolated the lady's well with the short DOF a bit more space wouldn't hurt.
2. Brighten up de lady's a bit.

Hope that helps!

Hamilton · 02-12-2011, 12:27 PM

Nice action shot! I know you need fast equipment for these shots, so I am out of the running. Love good sports photos.

**Ash** · 02-12-2011, 12:58 PM

Agreed, good result - just needs some boosting in PP, particularly with the shadow details. You may subsequently need to tone down the highlight details in order to avoid them looking overpowering in the image.

02-12-2011, 04:38 AM	#1
Brighthelmstone10 New Member Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Brighton Photos: Gallery Posts: 22	Lewes Ladies vs Beckenham Lens: SMC A* 300mm f4 Camera: K-x Photo Location: Lewes, Sussex, UK ISO: 400 Shutter Speed: 1/1000s Aperture: F5 Lewes Ladies vs Beckenham, 30 January 2011 Attached Images

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02-12-2011, 05:33 AM	#2
Fries Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Gauw Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 2,582	Somehow I had to smile when this photo appeared on my screen... Nice work! But there are possibly two things that would (perhaps) make this shot a bit better. 1. I think de crop is a bit to tight. Perhaps a little bit more space on the right and even more on the left. Since you have isolated the lady's well with the short DOF a bit more space wouldn't hurt. 2. Brighten up de lady's a bit. Hope that helps!

02-12-2011, 12:27 PM	#3
Hamilton Forum Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: Richmond, VA Photos: Gallery Posts: 55	Nice action shot! I know you need fast equipment for these shots, so I am out of the running. Love good sports photos.

02-12-2011, 12:58 PM	#4
Ash Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Toowoomba, Queensland Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 23,920	Agreed, good result - just needs some boosting in PP, particularly with the shadow details. You may subsequently need to tone down the highlight details in order to avoid them looking overpowering in the image.

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