Streets Stop right here

ASa · 02-24-2011, 04:38 AM

Hi,

I'm not going to spoil the pic for you, as I'm hoping for a few comments for it. I can then tell you my own thoughts about it

Stop right here by -ASa

Thanks!

**Ash** · 02-24-2011, 05:01 AM

Difficult to interpret this image as the subject matter is unclear. Between the bus stop shelter and the fence in the foreground, there is little that stands out in the scene. If you stood just behind the fence and took the same shot with a wider angle and less flare, this may have turned out even more appealing.

SpecialK · 02-24-2011, 08:02 AM

Somewhat monotone and bland. Dark clouds a bit distracting. I would crop the clouds and grass for more of a graphic composition that makes the subject a bit more prominent.

ASa · 02-28-2011, 04:20 AM

Thank you guys for the input. What I was trying to achieve was a bit of a controversial approach. A square crop with lots of lines filling the image.
But now that I look at it, I do agree with you guys on the matters you mentioned, the flare, the darkness... So thank you for the critics and hopefully see you soon with another pic of mine

02-24-2011, 04:38 AM	#1
ASa Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Tampere/Helsinki Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 218	Stop right here Lens: SMC M 50mm f/1.7 Camera: K10D Photo Location: Reykjavik ISO: 100 Shutter Speed: 1/1500s Aperture: F2.8 Hi, I'm not going to spoil the pic for you, as I'm hoping for a few comments for it. I can then tell you my own thoughts about it Stop right here by -ASa Thanks!

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02-24-2011, 05:01 AM	#2
Ash Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Toowoomba, Queensland Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 23,920	Difficult to interpret this image as the subject matter is unclear. Between the bus stop shelter and the fence in the foreground, there is little that stands out in the scene. If you stood just behind the fence and took the same shot with a wider angle and less flare, this may have turned out even more appealing.

02-24-2011, 08:02 AM	#3
SpecialK Pentaxian Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: So California Photos: Gallery Posts: 16,480	Somewhat monotone and bland. Dark clouds a bit distracting. I would crop the clouds and grass for more of a graphic composition that makes the subject a bit more prominent.

02-28-2011, 04:20 AM	#4
ASa Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Tampere/Helsinki Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 218 Original Poster	Thank you guys for the input. What I was trying to achieve was a bit of a controversial approach. A square crop with lots of lines filling the image. But now that I look at it, I do agree with you guys on the matters you mentioned, the flare, the darkness... So thank you for the critics and hopefully see you soon with another pic of mine

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