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Ombre2 · 02-24-2011, 09:29 AM

One of my early stitched panoramics. It's 5 images, with a Palette Knife artistic effect from Photoshop.

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atupdate · 02-24-2011, 11:13 AM

It is really hard to critique a pano, as the details are so small. The location looks lovely but the right side of the image doesn't really support the story on the left side of the image. Overall the image does tell the story from your vacation but to the casual viewer, I would rather just see a print of the right side of the image.

Tim

Ombre2 · 02-24-2011, 01:02 PM

Thanks Tim. All feedback/suggestions are appreciated!

Dave

juu · 02-24-2011, 03:16 PM

I think it is a nice picture, and certainly a nice memento from what must have been a very good trip.

However, it is not clear what is the main subject of the photo, there are just so many, and as atupdate mentioned the two sides of the picture are quite different.

It's certainly the sort of picture that the hotel in question would be happy to put on their website or put on the wall or ad brochure. But I wouldn't put it on my wall.

02-24-2011, 09:29 AM	#1
Ombre2 Inactive Account Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: South Carolina Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 21	Dance Lessons at the Pool Lens: SMC 15mm Camera: ist DL Photo Location:* Mexico ISO: 200 Shutter Speed: 1/1500s One of my early stitched panoramics. It's 5 images, with a Palette Knife artistic effect from Photoshop. Attached Images

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02-24-2011, 11:13 AM	#2
atupdate Pentaxian Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Dayton, OH Photos: Gallery Posts: 4,724	It is really hard to critique a pano, as the details are so small. The location looks lovely but the right side of the image doesn't really support the story on the left side of the image. Overall the image does tell the story from your vacation but to the casual viewer, I would rather just see a print of the right side of the image. Tim

02-24-2011, 01:02 PM	#3
Ombre2 Inactive Account Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: South Carolina Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 21 Original Poster	Thanks Tim. All feedback/suggestions are appreciated! Dave

02-24-2011, 03:16 PM	#4
juu Veteran Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 680	I think it is a nice picture, and certainly a nice memento from what must have been a very good trip. However, it is not clear what is the main subject of the photo, there are just so many, and as atupdate mentioned the two sides of the picture are quite different. It's certainly the sort of picture that the hotel in question would be happy to put on their website or put on the wall or ad brochure. But I wouldn't put it on my wall.

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