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03-19-2011, 04:53 AM - 1 Like   #1
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[langtitle=pl]Solange[/langtitle]
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Solange przy oknie.

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03-19-2011, 07:06 AM   #2
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I really like the first one. It looks like an old painting. Nicely done!
03-20-2011, 12:45 AM   #3
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QuoteOriginally posted by kbrede Quote
I really like the first one. It looks like an old painting. Nicely done!
I agree. There's a touch of Vermeer about these lovely photos. You've captured the same stillness, the feeling of air around the subject and the baroque quality of light. Really enchanting shots of high technical quality. Congrats. That's some lens, isn't it?
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I love the model, but the set / props look very contrived.

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Lovely model!
The setup seems very staged though.
Though again, the models hair, pose and colors really work!
03-21-2011, 03:07 AM   #6
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03-21-2011, 04:07 AM   #7
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Great model and really nice light. Well done!
I'll have to echo the remarks about the props on the table. A different arrangement would address some of the "contrivedness". I also think the vignetting/shading could be a bit more subtle. But still very nice images!

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These are truly remarkable! The arrangement doesn't bother me at all. My only critique would be to crop a bit off the top of ## 2 & 3. Keep 'em coming!
06-15-2011, 09:40 AM   #9
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Number 2 is my favorite. Great lighting and composure.
06-15-2011, 02:05 PM   #10
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The first 2 are very nice, the set up and scene are very well done but I must say I do not care much for the 3rd. Don't know if you were going for this but it looks like she's trying to "mug" the camera for a sense of intimidation.
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Exceptional images, but I don't like the chin up pose in number three. Lighting, setup, processing, everything is just SUPERB!
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I really like the first one. In the second one, I'm not sure about the position of the subject looking out of the frame, but I definitely don't like the position of the hair across the hand, or actually the position of the hand in general. The third one just doesn't do that much for me. The lighting is excellent in all of them.

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06-17-2011, 06:04 PM   #13
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I think the first 2 shots are amazing!. the only critique from me would to have had a few props taken out (fruit, etc) but wouldn't remove them all. to me, all that is needed is the beautiful girl, the window and a little something to show the mood/ personality of the person
the color cast gives it a very unique look.

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