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10-29-2007, 02:59 AM   #1
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10-29-2007, 07:33 AM   #2
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I like this, and think it is an interesting composition, but something about the kid in the foreground being so out of focus bothers me. I love the idea that the kid is blurred, bringing more attention to the kite, but I think just a bit more depth of field, but still keeping the kid out of focus, might have made it an even more interesting shot.

Good stuff!
10-29-2007, 09:31 AM   #3
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yea I agree, good idea yet there is something not right. the oof kid is a very dominant siluette aginst the skyline and is drawing attention. I like the suggestion of actually increasing the dof a bit and see where that goes, possibly also changing the angle abit so its a bit tighter coposition. somehow that little kite is not getting the attention its supposed to. if it is at some distance from the kid then maybe some weak fill flash would reach and light it but leave the kid unlit? brighter elements always command attention
10-29-2007, 02:30 PM   #4
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Thank you both, I was trying to find out why kite is not getting the attention its supposed to... I have figured it out now.

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