Thanks for the feedback. I am still trying to perfect my conversion, I've gone through various different software - picasa, gimp, I'm not using Faststone. I think library hangout was done with gimp which does give the best results, however it takes ages to use, especially as you have to go into ufraw first. Faststone is a good compromise.
The other issue is that the other 3 photos were taken on very bright days, and the highlights are gone in the originals to some extent. Library Hangout was taken on a grey rainy day...
This is cropped with just a touch of sharpening.
As you can see, very contrasty already. Would you say you prefer this look?