[balunz]

please critique my picture below

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Last edited by balunz; 05-19-2014 at 07:52 PM.

[Serenity]

I'll say something about the first two.
1. Nice colors and composition, but the flower is lacking sharpness.
2. Nice light on the flower, the sharpness is good and nice colors. I like the repetition with the other flowers in the background, but there is a white disturbing reflex in the lower corner.
Hope it helps.
/Anna

[balunz]

I'll say something about the first two.
1. Nice colors and composition, but the flower is lacking sharpness.
2. Nice light on the flower, the sharpness is good and nice colors. I like the repetition with the other flowers in the background, but there is a white disturbing reflex in the lower corner.
Hope it helps.
/Anna

thanks for your advice....must learn more n more....

[smf]

I like the photos of the flowers. I agree with Serenity's comments about the first two photos. I wish the center flower in the fifth photo was in sharper focus. A reflector (such as a piece of white or silver card) might allow you to use a relatively small aperture. Or a tripod, monopod or beanbag — perhaps combined with an off-camera shutter release or use of a self-timer — would allow you to use a higher ISO and smaller aperture.

The colorful bus could be an interesting subject, but I would prefer to see a different composition or angle of view. And you might want to experiment with the darkness and contrast settings of your software on the photo you posted.

Best wishes, and I hope you post more of your photos in this forum.

[balunz]

I like the photos of the flowers. I agree with Serenity's comments about the first two photos. I wish the center flower in the fifth photo was in sharper focus. A reflector (such as a piece of white or silver card) might allow you to use a relatively small aperture. Or a tripod, monopod or beanbag — perhaps combined with an off-camera shutter release or use of a self-timer — would allow you to use a higher ISO and smaller aperture.

The colorful bus could be an interesting subject, but I would prefer to see a different composition or angle of view. And you might want to experiment with the darkness and contrast settings of your software on the photo you posted.

Best wishes, and I hope you post more of your photos in this forum.

thanks a lot for your advice,
all of this photos no edited yet, its only resize from my Kx, and i wish some advice to exploring my kx, next i will more post photos in this forum to gain my skill about photograph.

on bus picture, i try about spanning trick hehe, i just an newbie on photograph, so i need more share experienced of shoot trick, tuning color, contrast etc.