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10-31-2007, 04:03 PM   #1
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Coney Island Beach

Ok,
This picture was taken in Brooklyn on Coney Island Beach.
The original is actually very nice but I decided to play around
and make it a couple years old tell me what you think....





10-31-2007, 04:36 PM   #2
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I like how you were able to make the scene look so vast. The similar color between the sky and sand gives off a great effect.

I'm not too fond of the added vignetting tho, it's just too much for my linking and has become a distraction. It feels like you're purposely limiting my view when the idea is to see as much as possible.
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I like the colour treatment of the photo - nostalgic and profound. Like old aged red wine.

One concern is that vignetting is usually added to enhance a subject or a theme where this photo is lacking. Once my attention is drawn to the middle portion of the photo by the vignetting, there is only this mini-wheel in the distance.
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I think the effect itself is well done since there appears to be some dirt and dust added. The vignetting effect makes it look like a fisheye shot. I agree that the actual subject is too small, I would have gone closer to get something of interest to cover more of the frame.

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