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Michu · 05-13-2011, 12:58 AM

Warunki domowe - światło z okna...

01

02

repaap · 05-13-2011, 03:29 AM

Sweet, great pictures, last strikes me, might be that flowers puts a dot at right place.

axl · 05-13-2011, 01:28 PM

nothing to critique IMO. Great shots, both of them, but I prefer the first one

**Dma110** · 05-13-2011, 01:49 PM

Excellent. Cannot find any fault in either one, except for the fact that they're not mine

Parallax · 05-14-2011, 08:19 AM

I see no faults of any kind, either; but I find the first one particularly captivating.

Venturi · 05-14-2011, 08:43 AM

If I make myself be very critical, the first one has too many elements pointing out of frame - her eyes & the flower in her hair draw me away from the photo. The 2nd photo both of those elements are directed back to the camera/viewer and the demand your attention.

Both are wonderful photos and you and she should be quite happy with the results.

thoughton · 05-16-2011, 06:52 AM

Both very good, and she is very attractive which always helps. 2nd one is better for me, for the eye contact, and the more pleasing arrangement of the flowers. Unfortunately the eyes seem slightly sharper in number 1. Perhaps rotate number 2 slightly so her eyes are the same height.

wshi · 05-17-2011, 12:12 AM

Looks great! I think one with her making eye contact with the positioning and framing of the first would be perfect.

Michu · 05-17-2011, 04:02 AM

Dziękuję wszystkim za opinie...

vrrattko · 05-17-2011, 08:49 AM

nothing to criticize here.....i like how lens rendered the fine texture of hairs, and nice out of focus as well.....prefer the first picture slightly.

Rupert · 05-17-2011, 08:57 AM

Excellent, both of them, not much more to say....lovely girl too!
Regards!

jimH · 06-25-2011, 06:17 PM

Originally posted by Michu

Warunki domowe - światło z okna...

01

02

Very nice! You've done a good job of putting her eyes as the center of attention. Beautifully clear eyes that capture the viewer. Good Job!!

guidoanselmi · 06-25-2011, 11:59 PM

both are pretty good portraits, though:

in 1, the look is a little vacant
in 2, her head's a bit crooked.

**Ash** · 06-26-2011, 02:41 AM

#2 is stunning, the slightly crooked head not being a problem IMO, but the head would have better been in the upper middle of the frame.
Well done with these results.

frank44 · 06-26-2011, 04:35 AM

Great photos good job with the eyes BUT to many flowers.

05-13-2011, 12:58 AM	#1
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axl Veteran Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Nove Zamky, Slovakia Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 7,183	nothing to critique IMO. Great shots, both of them, but I prefer the first one

05-13-2011, 01:49 PM	#4
Dma110 Site Supporter Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: Gilbert Arizona Posts: 559	Excellent. Cannot find any fault in either one, except for the fact that they're not mine

05-14-2011, 08:19 AM	#5
Parallax Senior Moderator Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: South Dakota Photos: Gallery Posts: 19,333	I see no faults of any kind, either; but I find the first one particularly captivating.

05-14-2011, 08:43 AM	#6
Venturi Veteran Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Tulsa, OK Photos: Gallery Posts: 2,636	If I make myself be very critical, the first one has too many elements pointing out of frame - her eyes & the flower in her hair draw me away from the photo. The 2nd photo both of those elements are directed back to the camera/viewer and the demand your attention. Both are wonderful photos and you and she should be quite happy with the results.

05-16-2011, 06:52 AM	#7
thoughton Veteran Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Saffron Walden, Essex Photos: Gallery Posts: 362	Both very good, and she is very attractive which always helps. 2nd one is better for me, for the eye contact, and the more pleasing arrangement of the flowers. Unfortunately the eyes seem slightly sharper in number 1. Perhaps rotate number 2 slightly so her eyes are the same height.

05-17-2011, 12:12 AM	#8
wshi Veteran Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Illinois Posts: 455	Looks great! I think one with her making eye contact with the positioning and framing of the first would be perfect.

05-17-2011, 04:02 AM	#9
Michu Forum Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: Bydgoszcz Posts: 59 Original Poster	Dziękuję wszystkim za opinie...

05-17-2011, 08:49 AM	#10
vrrattko Veteran Member Join Date: Jun 2010 Photos: Albums Posts: 753	nothing to criticize here.....i like how lens rendered the fine texture of hairs, and nice out of focus as well.....prefer the first picture slightly.

05-17-2011, 08:57 AM	#11
Rupert Veteran Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Texas Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 25,123	Excellent, both of them, not much more to say....lovely girl too! Regards!

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jimH Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: South Central Nebraska - USA Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 1,771	Originally posted by Michu Warunki domowe - światło z okna... 01 02 Very nice! You've done a good job of putting her eyes as the center of attention. Beautifully clear eyes that capture the viewer. Good Job!!

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guidoanselmi Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: LA, CA Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 131	both are pretty good portraits, though: in 1, the look is a little vacant in 2, her head's a bit crooked.

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Ash Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Toowoomba, Queensland Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 23,920	#2 is stunning, the slightly crooked head not being a problem IMO, but the head would have better been in the upper middle of the frame. Well done with these results.

06-26-2011, 04:35 AM	#15
frank44 Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: Australia Taree New south wales Photos: Gallery Posts: 44	Great photos good job with the eyes BUT to many flowers.

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