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06-05-2011, 09:24 PM   #1
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another bird photo, please give me some correction or advice about this photo


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06-06-2011, 04:07 AM   #2
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I like it very much. I'd prefer that the white area in the photo's upper right corner be eliminated by cropping or recoloring, as it calls attention to itself and draws me away from the bird.
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I like it very much. I'd prefer that the white area in the photo's upper right corner be eliminated by cropping or recoloring, as it calls attention to itself and draws me away from the bird.
thank you for note, i agree about croping white area on upper right corner area..but i want to ask you about placing signing, where should i place it??
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Nice parrot.
Maybe a bit underexposed, and looks dark. To remove the white spot try some crop, a square or something.

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Nice parrot.
Maybe a bit underexposed, and looks dark. To remove the white spot try some crop, a square or something.
thanks for advice, may a little change or exposure curve will help this matter...
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