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06-06-2011, 11:35 PM   #1
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[langtitle=id]another croping point of RIO[/langtitle]
Lens: SMC 50mm Camera: Kx Photo Location: tmii ISO: 100 Shutter Speed: 1/90s Aperture: F1.4 

hi all, please give me correction or critique for my image above,
this image the same one as before, but different croping point and some exposure curve editing...


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06-07-2011, 12:48 AM   #2
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This is a very good result.
Appears sharp and nicely rendered.
The lighting is a little flat, but nothing post processing cannot improve on.
The background is well controlled and complementary.
At the end, a gentle pass of unsharp mask would work wonders.
Good one.
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This is a very good result.
Appears sharp and nicely rendered.
The lighting is a little flat, but nothing post processing cannot improve on.
The background is well controlled and complementary.
At the end, a gentle pass of unsharp mask would work wonders.
Good one.
thank you ash...
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yes, this is much better

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yes, this is much better
thank you..
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Nice. Your bird really stands out from the background. Very good detail in most areas. There is a lot of good colour here but overall it seems a little bit dull. I would be tempted to brighten it up somewhat especially around the beak and lower down on the bird.
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