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balunz · 06-14-2011, 09:01 AM

fun child always interesting for me...please give me advice for my image below.

Last edited by balunz; 05-19-2014 at 07:52 PM.

SpecialK · 06-14-2011, 02:33 PM

The composition leaves too much area at the top. I would crop it square. The tilt up and away does not show a lot of her face, but it does look like she is having fun.

Kai · 06-14-2011, 08:46 PM

My thought is what she is looking at. Not much I would do aside from cropping as suggested. Next time, maybe try to leave more space to the left/front of her. I have a tough time composing myself as kids move often and quickly. I still have a lot to learn as well. Keep shooting.

balunz · 06-15-2011, 04:38 AM

Originally posted by SpecialK

The composition leaves too much area at the top. I would crop it square. The tilt up and away does not show a lot of her face, but it does look like she is having fun.

composition right?? ok...thanks for your advice

Originally posted by Kai

My thought is what she is looking at. Not much I would do aside from cropping as suggested. Next time, maybe try to leave more space to the left/front of her. I have a tough time composing myself as kids move often and quickly. I still have a lot to learn as well. Keep shooting.

thank you for your advice...

**Schraubstock** · 06-15-2011, 05:35 AM

Originally posted by balunz

fun child always interesting for me...please give me advice for my image below.

Hi

Bad composition or cropping often spoils an otherwise good motive.
In your case the girl in the picture looks like as if she is slowly sliding down out of the frame. Now I don't know if you took the pic like this or it was cropped like this.

I attach a quick mock up of what I thing would work better.
The shot also displays a slight green cast.

Greetings

balunz · 06-15-2011, 07:19 AM

Originally posted by Schraubstock

Hi

Bad composition or cropping often spoils an otherwise good motive.
In your case the girl in the picture looks like as if she is slowly sliding down out of the frame. Now I don't know if you took the pic like this or it was cropped like this.

I attach a quick mock up of what I thing would work better.
The shot also displays a slight green cast.

Greetings

hi..

i crop like that, thank you for your critique...its all about composition...

06-14-2011, 09:01 AM	#1
balunz Inactive Account Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: bekasi Posts: 72	[langtitle=id]Have Fun[/langtitle] Lens: Helios 135mm f2.8 Camera: Pentax Kx Photo Location: TMII ISO: 100 Shutter Speed: 1/250s Aperture: F4 fun child always interesting for me...please give me advice for my image below. Last edited by balunz; 05-19-2014 at 07:52 PM.

06-15-2011, 05:35 AM	#5
Schraubstock Site Supporter Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Melbourne Photos: Gallery Posts: 3,386	Originally posted by balunz fun child always interesting for me...please give me advice for my image below. Hi Bad composition or cropping often spoils an otherwise good motive. In your case the girl in the picture looks like as if she is slowly sliding down out of the frame. Now I don't know if you took the pic like this or it was cropped like this. I attach a quick mock up of what I thing would work better. The shot also displays a slight green cast. Greetings Last edited by Schraubstock; 07-24-2011 at 11:45 PM.

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06-14-2011, 02:33 PM	#2
SpecialK Pentaxian Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: So California Photos: Gallery Posts: 16,482	The composition leaves too much area at the top. I would crop it square. The tilt up and away does not show a lot of her face, but it does look like she is having fun.

06-14-2011, 08:46 PM	#3
Kai Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: San Diego, Ca. USA Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 148	My thought is what she is looking at. Not much I would do aside from cropping as suggested. Next time, maybe try to leave more space to the left/front of her. I have a tough time composing myself as kids move often and quickly. I still have a lot to learn as well. Keep shooting.

06-15-2011, 04:38 AM	#4
balunz Inactive Account Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: bekasi Posts: 72 Original Poster	Originally posted by SpecialK The composition leaves too much area at the top. I would crop it square. The tilt up and away does not show a lot of her face, but it does look like she is having fun. composition right?? ok...thanks for your advice Originally posted by Kai My thought is what she is looking at. Not much I would do aside from cropping as suggested. Next time, maybe try to leave more space to the left/front of her. I have a tough time composing myself as kids move often and quickly. I still have a lot to learn as well. Keep shooting. thank you for your advice...

06-15-2011, 07:19 AM	#6
balunz Inactive Account Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: bekasi Posts: 72 Original Poster	Originally posted by Schraubstock Hi Bad composition or cropping often spoils an otherwise good motive. In your case the girl in the picture looks like as if she is slowly sliding down out of the frame. Now I don't know if you took the pic like this or it was cropped like this. I attach a quick mock up of what I thing would work better. The shot also displays a slight green cast. Greetings hi.. i crop like that, thank you for your critique...its all about composition...

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