I don't know what caused the issues with colour and sharpness, but in terms of composition the tree at the top has slightly obscured the top of Kinkakuji and the azalea (I think) at the bottom of the frame obscures the reflection. I find the dark branches at the top draw my eye away from the subject instead of simply framing it. Having said that, it's a different angle and you've managed to avoid getting any people in the frame which is an achievement considering how popular Kinkakuji is. Do you have it viewable somewhere else where it's sharp? I'd like to see how much difference that makes.
This one of mine is a more cliche shot which I've quickly tweaked. Brightened and removed the yellow colour cast but now the shrine is slightly blown out.
Last edited by RobG; 06-26-2011 at 06:25 AM.