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07-04-2011, 03:13 AM   #1
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Lens: FA28/2.8AL Camera: K5 Photo Location: home ISO: 800 Shutter Speed: 1/25s Aperture: F2.8 

She doesn't hide her feelings...




DA55/1.4 iso800 1/100 f1.4




FA28/2.8AL iso 200 1/100 f8.0

Are these images capturing her changing mood?

07-06-2011, 03:08 AM   #2
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Any advice on composition, pp exposure etc would be gratefully received.
07-12-2011, 01:27 PM   #3
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#1 darker background. make darker in photoshop. i like the one eye focus.
#2 i think is a boring shot. also think whole face and eyes should be in focus. since background is boring.
#3 i think a softer background would be better. but love the framing.
07-12-2011, 11:27 PM   #4
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QuoteOriginally posted by hockmasm Quote
#1 darker background. make darker in photoshop. i like the one eye focus.
#2 i think is a boring shot. also think whole face and eyes should be in focus. since background is boring.
#3 i think a softer background would be better. but love the framing.
Thanks for the reply, it is helpful to have this type of critique so that when taking further pictures, these points are considered. That is especially true of number 3, where a shallower dof would of been needed at the time.

#1...I am using iphoto at the moment, so in order to lighten the shadow area on her face, it led to the background being lightened as well. Would I have more control over this aspect with Aperture3?


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