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lamented bovine · 01-10-2012, 09:01 PM

I have the non OS version of the lens, I also use the Sigma Em 140 DG ring flash.
Hand held @300mm.

Advice would be great. Does photo look over done?

Thaks in advance
Macca

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photolady95 · 01-10-2012, 09:29 PM

Originally posted by lamented bovine

Does photo look over done?

Yes. I wouldn't have given it to so much orange. And I would have cropped from the right closer to it's back. Leave more room in the front of its head. Too much white space too.

lamented bovine · 01-10-2012, 09:38 PM

Originally posted by photolady

Yes. I wouldn't have given it to so much orange. And I would have cropped from the right closer to it's back. Leave more room in the front of its head. Too much white space too.

Thankyou for the advice.
Macca

photolady95 · 01-10-2012, 09:57 PM

You're welcome. The white space draws my eyes there instead of to the Monarch.

lamented bovine · 01-11-2012, 03:03 AM

Originally posted by photolady

You're welcome. The white space draws my eyes there instead of to the Monarch.

I did a re edit, I think I like what I did. Thanks for tips.
Macca

01-10-2012, 09:01 PM	#1
lamented bovine Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Brisbane Photos: Albums Posts: 480	Monarch Butterfly Lens: Sigma 120-400 non OS Camera: K7 Photo Location: Toowoomba ISO: 400 Shutter Speed: 1/500s Aperture: F8 I have the non OS version of the lens, I also use the Sigma Em 140 DG ring flash. Hand held @300mm. Advice would be great. Does photo look over done? Thaks in advance Macca Attached Images

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01-10-2012, 09:29 PM	#2
photolady95 Otis Memorial Pentaxian Join Date: May 2009 Location: Cruising the forum watching his back Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 12,712	Originally posted by lamented bovine Does photo look over done? Yes. I wouldn't have given it to so much orange. And I would have cropped from the right closer to it's back. Leave more room in the front of its head. Too much white space too.

01-10-2012, 09:38 PM	#3
lamented bovine Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Brisbane Photos: Albums Posts: 480 Original Poster	Originally posted by photolady Yes. I wouldn't have given it to so much orange. And I would have cropped from the right closer to it's back. Leave more room in the front of its head. Too much white space too. Thankyou for the advice. Macca

01-10-2012, 09:57 PM	#4
photolady95 Otis Memorial Pentaxian Join Date: May 2009 Location: Cruising the forum watching his back Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 12,712	You're welcome. The white space draws my eyes there instead of to the Monarch.

01-11-2012, 03:03 AM	#5
lamented bovine Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Brisbane Photos: Albums Posts: 480 Original Poster	Originally posted by photolady You're welcome. The white space draws my eyes there instead of to the Monarch. I did a re edit, I think I like what I did. Thanks for tips. Macca

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