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Velja · 01-13-2012, 12:57 AM

cscurrier · 01-13-2012, 02:10 AM

High contrast and sorta creepy. I love it. Only thing I could recommend is burning in the person closest to the foreground to blacken him/her a bit more and not be so grey. I might even dodge the "RAMP" on the wall to help it pop a bit more just to help sit in with the contrasty scene. All in all it's great. Reminds me of some of my earlier b+w short films but way better.

Velja · 01-13-2012, 04:46 AM

Hi, Cameron
Thanks for your attention and advice. "Problem" was created when I was at the exit of the passage "remove" excess hindering objects (people, cars, etc). I thought to alleviate the burnt background, but we do nothing is not wise "worked." Such as it is now, and it is a variant color, are too well at shows. Me personally in both variants something wrong. Probably not a good biri too self-critical, is not it?
Regards Ve

cscurrier · 01-13-2012, 07:54 PM

Self criticism comes with the game!

Macario · 01-14-2012, 01:10 PM

very cool shot. But I do agree with the person being too gray. Burning it a bit would do it good

01-13-2012, 12:57 AM	#1
Velja Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2011 Location: Velenje Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 554	pursuit Lens: Sigma 18-50 / 2,8-4,5 Camera: Pentax K10D Photo Location: Celje ; Slovenia ISO: 1600 Shutter Speed: 1/15s Aperture: F8

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01-13-2012, 02:10 AM	#2
cscurrier Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Bellingham, WA Photos: Gallery Posts: 280	High contrast and sorta creepy. I love it. Only thing I could recommend is burning in the person closest to the foreground to blacken him/her a bit more and not be so grey. I might even dodge the "RAMP" on the wall to help it pop a bit more just to help sit in with the contrasty scene. All in all it's great. Reminds me of some of my earlier b+w short films but way better.

01-13-2012, 04:46 AM	#3
Velja Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2011 Location: Velenje Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 554 Original Poster	Hi, Cameron Thanks for your attention and advice. "Problem" was created when I was at the exit of the passage "remove" excess hindering objects (people, cars, etc). I thought to alleviate the burnt background, but we do nothing is not wise "worked." Such as it is now, and it is a variant color, are too well at shows. Me personally in both variants something wrong. Probably not a good biri too self-critical, is not it? Regards Ve

01-13-2012, 07:54 PM	#4
cscurrier Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Bellingham, WA Photos: Gallery Posts: 280	Self criticism comes with the game!

01-14-2012, 01:10 PM	#5
Macario Pentaxian Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Hoek van Holland Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 1,393	very cool shot. But I do agree with the person being too gray. Burning it a bit would do it good

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