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02-25-2012, 04:49 PM   #16
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Your first shot at Pshop? Wow, Nicely done!

03-11-2012, 12:41 PM   #17
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I really like this last version. The no-so-warm tones work well. I agree with the above posters: the composition is great. I like that the woman and the flowers take up about equal parts of the image separated along the diagonal - it gives the image a nice balance. Great work!

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03-12-2012, 06:03 AM   #18
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Hi

Can I post my version of this lovely photograph up for consideration ?

Without trying to nitpick, there are still a few minor things to deal with IMHO.
I don't like the bright reflection at the upper right hand corner, I think it interferes with the picture. I have reduced this brightness somewhat and cropped out the very top of it. It does not compromise the framing as there is only very little reduction in size. I also have edited out the circle flair next to the bracelet, once you know it is there it becomes annoying, so it had to go. And finally I gave the hair a bit more texture. And I still was not so happy with the skin toning, but as soon as you take out the excessive yellow so changes the green. But to me it looks a better "garden green" this way. However this could be seen by different people differently. Only you can tell if the green dress looks right to you or not.
My monitor is calibrated.

I thought I make the effort to better explain what I had in mind.

Greetings

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