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04-08-2012, 04:22 PM   #1
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Playing around with B&W. Please don't hold back, the criticism I'm getting on here is helping a lot.


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04-08-2012, 04:37 PM   #2
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love the first one, strong contrast and sharpness.
metallic texture presents very well.

and the rest just seem lacking some contrast after seeing the first one.
i think second image could be more dramatic if place the camera lower to aim more sky.

third one contains too much black on the background that makes it a bit distracting.

forth is a great geometric composition with the bubble well balanced.

fifth would be great if angle to the left of the fence, cause the fence would be a great leading line to the cross.
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Gave no. 3 some more dimension, forgot how much I had cropped it! I think this has a more dynamic feel to it.

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